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"ocr_text": {},
"pangpi": {},
"wrong_words": {},
"title": "My Weekend Plan",
"content": "I am go to park with my friend...",
"correct_words": "I am going to the park with my friend...",
"pigai": {
"comment": "本文词数约140词，符合80词的要求。优点是采用了书信的分段结构，有基本的书信格式，针对缺乏自信和学业忙的问题给出了简单的建议。不足是结构连贯性差，段落之间没有呼应不同困扰的逻辑衔接，内容上遗漏了多个核心要点，整体内容不够完整，逻辑也不够清晰。",
"score_items": [{
"item": "内容",
"score": 40,
"reason": "只覆盖了缺乏自信、学业忙没时间发展爱好这两个要点，未涉及学习进步小、被嘲笑、和父母沟通少的内容，要点覆盖不足"
}, {
"item": "语言准确性",
"score": 60,
"reason": "语言表达较简单，存在表达不地道的问题，但基本能传递简单意思，语法错误较少"
}, {
"item": "结构与流畅度",
"score": 50,
"reason": "采用分段式结构，但段落间逻辑关联弱，衔接生硬，没有针对不同困扰的清晰对应板块"
}],
"total_score": 50,
"highlight_items": [{
"reason": "用具体的例子说明如何利用碎片时间发展爱好，让建议更具体可操作，增强了内容的实用性",
"origin_sentence": "For example, play football or basketball if you have a lot of time. Listen to music if you have a short time."
}, {
"reason": "结尾用鼓励性的话语给予朋友支持，符合书信的情感交流需求，传递了正向的态度",
"origin_sentence": "I think you can do anything if you try your best. Be courageous."
}],
"topic_relevance": "切题",
"suggestion_items": [{
"reason": "原句表达比较生硬，不符合英语的习惯表达，“do it yourself”指代模糊，不清楚具体要做什么",
"level1_type": "词汇",
"level2_type": "表达不地道",
"new_sentence": "If you feel lonely because you don't have close friends, take it easy. You can take the initiative.",
"merge_sentence": "If [you feel lonely because]() you don't have [](any) close friends, [take it easy.](be relaxed.) You [can take the initiative.](should do it yourself.)",
"origin_sentence": "If you don't have any close friends, be relaxed. You should do it yourself."
}, {
"reason": "原句只给出了规划时间的建议，但没有说明规划时间和提升自信之间的关联，内容不完整，也没有针对自信问题给出更直接的建议",
"level1_type": "内容",
"level2_type": "内容不完整",
"new_sentence": "If you lack confidence, you can start by planning your time carefully to make your study and hobbies more organized, which can help you gain a sense of achievement.",
"merge_sentence": "If you [lack confidence,](feel not confident about yourself,) you can [start by planning](plan) your time [carefully to make your study and hobbies more organized, which can help you gain a sense of achievement.](carefully.)",
"origin_sentence": "If you feel not confident about yourself, you can plan your time carefully."
}, {
"reason": "原句逻辑较跳跃，直接说同学会同意过于绝对，没有体现出主动交流的过程，逻辑不够合理",
"level1_type": "逻辑",
"level2_type": "逻辑",
"new_sentence": "Try to start a conversation with your classmates actively. You can invite them to play football together, and I'm sure you'll get along well and have a good time.",
"merge_sentence": "Try to [start a conversation](speak) with your [classmates actively.](classmates, and they'll chat with you.) You can invite them to play football [together,](too. They can agree,) and [I'm sure you'll get along well and](you will) have a good time.",
"origin_sentence": "Try to speak with your classmates, and they'll chat with you. You can invite them to play football too. They can agree, and you will have a good time."
}]
},"runse": {}
}
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